Hi! Today me and my class were learning about "WRITTING" It was Show not tell. Here are some of mine.
Telling- (Gina is in love).
She was bright pink and had heart pupils on her eyes she was obsessed with tomatoes!
Telling- Pirana was furious!
Showing- Pirana's skin was like burning fire she was raging so much she tuned in to a ragging bull!
Telling- Cade was sad.
Showing- Cade had tears rolling down his face his mind has shut down, he was basically done.
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