Friday 8 November 2019

My Writing.

Hi people!
This blog is about my week 3 term 4 writting!
Here it is.

I was down the street, my face brightened when my eyes looked up. “Finally! I might be able to win the contest!” I hold up my skirt and peacefully walked up the stairs. The red carpet was red as blood and the lights were as bright as the sun. As I walk into the room, the first thing I saw was bright lights with people dancing and dancing. Happy faces started to shine! When the contest was about to start.. A huge lightning struck down the ceiling. “Evacuate! Evacuate! EVACUATE!” repeated the mayor. It was a bad idea. Water began to puddle at everyone’s feet.The water dripping down was getting heavier every second. People ran down. Suddenly, the water level started to rise. “ What is going on?!” screamed the mayor’s fiancĂ©e. People started to drown and scream. “Looks like I’m the only one who can swim” I say. Suddenly I see someone struggling to swim. “ Claire!” I shout. I swam closer. “ Valarie, don’t.” She says. “ WHY?!” I shout. “ No, just don’t” she says. “ Why.. Why are doing this, you might die” I shout. “ You’re the only one who can do this” Then she hands me an umbrella. “Use this for the only good” she says. “ Huh? What does that mean?”


I miraculously teleported somewhere dark. It felt weird. I had a weird tingly feeling. Suddenly I heard whispers running through darkness. “Ugh, I’m probably imagining things” Instantly the whispers have evolved. The Whispers became.. Normal Talks. “Oh no I’m gonna die, Im gonna die!” One of the voices. “Oh yes, POWER I FEEL THE POWER” shouted one of the voices. “ You’re a wizard Valarie” whispered one of the voices. “Huh? Isn’t that from Harry Potter? But not the Valarie part. I immediately realized that the voices were coming from somewhere. I listened and followed the trail of voices in the pitch dark night. After hours of listening, I found this mysterious house. The voices vanished. But there was only one that was still talking. “ I believe in you, Valerie” and started to fade away. I walked up the creaking stairs, and knocked on the door one time, twice, thrice. No one was answering. Suddenly The door opened.  


Water was rushing down the floor! The water was rising. Soon, everything would be underwater. I swam up and tried to breathe. I can’t breathe! After a minute I checked my heart beat, my heart wasn’t breathing! I was still alive! I raised upon the water and jumped to a tree. The water level wasn’t rising. “Yes! I can finally get out of here! But I couldn't move. “It looks like I have to fetch something?”. My umbrella was glowing. I looked down. Something green was glowing. I fetched the green thing. It was and emerald! Suddenly, the umbrella opened up a box. It looked like the emerald was missing! When I put the emerald inside the box, I blacked out. I ended up back at the party and found myself dancing. Now for the costume contestants. There is only one winner which is… Drumroll please….. Valarie Halls! I cheered for myself! I had been working on my outfit for a long time! I made it!

 Bye!







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